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Poem Dedicated To Rachel


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I had posted on the 24th of June and added a poem for Rachel. For those of you who didn't see the post, here is the poem.

 

I WATCHED YOU LOOKING AT ME WITH A BLANK STARE

 

WHY I ASK?? THIS IS SO UNFAIR.

 

YOUR SHAKING YOUR LEFT ARM AND APPEAR TO BE CHOKIN

 

WHATS WRONG I ASK, BUT NO WORDS ARE SPOKIN.

 

 

WHAT'S HAPPENING TO MY DAUGHTER OF TWENTY TWO

 

WHY CAN'T WE FIX THIS, I FEEL SO BLUE.

 

THE STROKE TOOK OVER, BUT WE DID NOT KNOW

 

HOW MUCH THIS DISEASE WOULD CONTINUE TO GROW.

 

 

YOU'VE WORKED SO HARD DAY AFTER DAY

 

FOR THIS I GIVE THANKS, AND CONTINUE TO PRAY.

 

SOME DAYS ARE GOOD, AND OTHERS ARE BAD.

 

IT'S HARD NOT TO THINK OF WHAT WE HAD.

 

 

YOU'RE OUR LITTLE ANGEL, A GIFT FROM ABOVE

 

NO MATTER WHAT, WE'LL SHOWER YOU WITH LOVE.

 

SO KEEP ON FIGHTIN AND RAISE THAT CUP,

 

WE WILL TOAST TO YOU AND NEVER GIVE UP!!

 

 

 

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Lisa:

 

lovely poem, lots of hugs as a mother I can understand what you are going through, my mom used to cry every time she sees me, and ready to give all her inheritance to me :bouncing_off_wall: not a bad deal considering she is quite wealthy, when I used to cry and throw tantrum, she said many times I wish God had chosen her to have stroke instead of her daughter. Now 3 years post stroke I just want my mom to be very proud of me, and supportive of me.

 

I love you and all the moms. as always s*** happens but I would want people to remembr me or any other survivor oh she gave such a great fight, and not as a poor soul. who suffered adversity at such a young age.

 

 

Asha

 

 

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(((((((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))))) Lisa, It is so hard for a parent to see there child in illness.pain, fighting so hard.

 

Your love shines through and I know you and husband do the best and would grab the moon if it would help.

 

 

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your love shines through, no matter what happens to our children we always wish it was us or it was something else not so bad, I 'm glad you are blogging. I have known a quite a few parents who also said why us so the answer is really thank you lord that rachel is still hrer, I have also known many who have lost there children and they also said why us.rachel is blessed to have you and her dad there for her. an we are all blessed to have you here. :rolleyes:

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An awesome poem! You can feel how it was written purely from your heart feeling what it feels. There is no greater love than a Mother's love here on Earth.

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